Letter an die host family

Hey =) hab hhier mal den ersten entwurf von meinem letter an die host family für meine application forms.. wär echt nett wenn da mal kurz einer drüber schauen könnte =)

Dear host family,

First of all, I really want to thank you for reading my letter.
My name is Katharina Bibinger and I'm 14 years old at the moment. My birthday is on the 7th of April. I live in a really small village which is called Friolzheim. It's in the southwest of Germany. I like living in a village because it's not so hectic like living in a big city. I can also drive to the nearer towns with bus and can go shopping or to the cinema. That's what I do often at the weekends, sometimes with my friends and sometimes with my family.
In school I've got a lot of friends an I think it will be hard to leave them such a long time but I'm sure I can handle it. With my friends I can always have fun an we laugh a lot.
After school I go home by bus, so I'm at home at 1.30 pm. When I'm at home, I eat something my mother cook. After eating I do my homework and do other things for school. Then I do things with my friends or something on my computer.
At three days in the week I have also school in the afternoon. Then I eat in our cafeteria and do homework at school. When I come home after this schooldays I'm very tired and only relax.
I live at a house with my mum, my dad and my sister. The relationship to my parents is very good. I love them a lot and they are really wonderfull. My sister and I often argue but I think thats normal between sisters and I love her, too.
In the U.S.A. I would want to try a American sport, or a sport which you can't do here in Germany.

Now, I want to write about my motivation to live a half year in the U.S.A. . First of all, of course, I want to perfect my English. But it's not only this. I also want to learn everything about the American way of life. I want to be a real part of the family and culture. I think I could not only get better in English, but I can also learn much about myself and can get more self-confident.

Love, Katharina

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host family letter - kleine verbesserung

Hallöchen Smily
hab iwie spaß dran, texte zu verbessern, also hab ich mal über deinen brief drübergelesen ;]
der brief ist ja shconmal gut geworden. =)
naja ich würd jetzt nur son paar kleinere sachen verbessern ... see below.


Dear host family,

First of all, I really want to thank you for reading my letter.
My name is Katharina Bibinger and I'm 14 years old at the moment. My birthday is on the 7th of April. I live in a really small village which is called Friolzheim. It's in the southwest of Germany. I like living in a village because it's not so hectic like living in a big city. I can also drive to the nearer towns by bus and can go shopping or to the cinema. That's what I often do at the weekends, sometimes with my friends and sometimes with my family.
At school I've got a lot of friends. I think it will be hard to leave them for such a long time but I'm sure I can handle it. With my friends I always have fun an we laugh a lot.
After school I go home by bus, so that I'm at home at 1.30 pm. When I'm at home, I eat something my mother has cooked. After lunch I do my homework and all the other things for school. Then I meet my friends or do something at my computer.
Three days a week I also have school in the afternoon. Then I eat in our school cafeteria and do my homework at school. When I come home after these schooldays I'm very tired and only relax.
I live in a house with my mum, my dad and my sister. The relationship with my parents is very good. I love them a lot and they are really wonderful. My sister and I often argue but I think that's normal between sisters and I love her, too.
In the USA I would like to try an American sport, or a sport which you can't do here in Germany.

Now, I want to tell you about my motivation to live half a year in the USA. First of all, of course, I want to improve my English. But that's not the only thing. I also want to learn everything about the American way of life. I want to be a real part of the family and culture. I think I could not only get better in English, but I can also learn much about myself and get more self-confident.

Love, Katharina


joaa. am ende würd ich vielleicht nochmal hinzufügen, dass du deiner potenziellen host family sehr dankbar bist, dass sie bereit ist dir so eine chance zu geben &dir dieses jahr zu ermöglichen. Zwinker

Lg, Lisa

hey

ist ja schon mal ganz gut geworden:) ich würde aber trotzdem noch etwas mehr zu dir schreiben. Was sind deine Stärken und Schwächen? Was machst du gerne oder in deiner freizeit?

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