Hey ihr lieben 
Endlich ist mein Dear Hostfamily letter fertig. ich hab mich echt schwer getan 
Nun wäre es super lieb, wenn jemand mal drüber lesen könnte. Mit der Grammatik hab ich es leider überhaupt nicht 
Bin über jede Hilfe dankbar
Dear host family,
First of all I want to thank you taking time to read my letter. In the following lines I want to tell you something about me. My name is XX and I was born on the xxth of October 19xx in Germany. I live in XX, a small town in the northwest of Germany near the northsea together with my parents. We live in a house with a big garden, near the centre. I have two older sisters Christina and Elisa, they are 26 and 24 years old. Also i have three nephews Nick (4 years), Noah (3 years) and Ben ( 1 year) and one niece Haylie (1 year).
At the moment i am going to the profrssional school. I will finish my education as a nursey school teacher in summer of 2015. Ater that i want to be an Au Pair in America. I want i scine more than two years. It is a great chance for me to see different cultures and provide my english skills. I think it is a great thing to be an au pair, because you can learn a lot about the typical way of life, the people and about yourself, I want to know how your family lives and i would very happy to be a part of it.
After my Year as a Au Pair in your family i want to begin a second education in a childrens hospital.In my Opinion it the most interesting think to work with medicine and with children at once. I love to help people, specialy to help children to be healthy.
In my freetime i like to go out and meet friends. My best freinds are named Darleen, Celina and Anki. They are very important for me and we have very much fun together. I like to go swim or inline skating , too. And very often i enjoy to have a interesting , fantasy book and go in dreams of this wolrds.Sometimes I read all day long if the book is exciting
I spend very much of my freetime with kids. I like to go outside with my nephews and my niece. No matter witch weather it is. It is the best feeling to see them happy. My sisters and i have a very good relationship. If we had time we are going out at play billiard or go swimming together.
I have two mouses, there names are Opa Gerke and Baumann. I would (400)be very happy if your family have pets.
I have my drivers license since july 2014. It is not very long, but i drive every day 20 kilometers to school and back. I am a very safety driver, particularly if childrens drives in my car, too.
My friends and my family would discribing me as a friendly and helpful girl. I am very responsibly amd Honesty and empathy are very important for me, too
I would like to thanks for welcoming in your family for one year now and giving me the chance to know how an American family lives. I hope I will become a member of the family, I can be a big sister for one year and to gain new experiences.
I am an upfront with others and I am willing to learn new things, I was very pleased if I could do a year as an Aupair.
Yours sincerely,
S.J